A really cool article off Bang2Write talks about how many authors and screenwriters wrote their hits in their 40s or older. So there is hope for me.
Take a look to give yourself motivation!
A really cool article off Bang2Write talks about how many authors and screenwriters wrote their hits in their 40s or older. So there is hope for me.
Take a look to give yourself motivation!
There are those that say, keep your projects (books, scripts, etc…) secret because you might fail. Then there are those that say announcing it will help push you to complete it because of the fear of failure. I like the second way.
A writing competition is being sponsored by Launch Pad by the Tracking Board that is bringing together book and movie houses to review entries. Luckily, you do not need a complete novel to enter. Even more luckily for me, I have a pretty complete novel to enter.
So, I need to come up with a name for the trilogy, select 50 pages of text, from the novel, as the entry submission and put together a one page summary, novel and possibly trilogy. All before the 30th of June. Will find out if I was lucky by mid September.
So if you ever wanted to write a book or have one in the works or completed, check out the link. Wish me luck!
While I work on my epic adventure story about the downfall of Atlantis, I have recently started loving the epic music of Two Steps From Hell. I like to write to it, which is really cool when I am doing an action scene.
It also struck me as Cirque du Soleil-ish in their shows. In fact, the game play videos that the link above is mated to started to give me ideas.
The venue is a enclosed stadium, with three quarters of the seating available. The stage is the field below that backs up to a mountain that encompasses the last quarter of the stadium.
Up and way in the back of the mountain is an orchestra and band blaring out epic songs that are piped through the stadiums speakers. The seats occasionally vibrate to the beat of the music.
Closer to the crowds, high over head are singers belting out the vocals of the songs. Angelic voices that tear at the heart or stir the emotions to the action below.
A massive fight scene develops on the stage or stadium field. Some participants are doing aerial jumps over their opponents. The stadium is darkened and parts of the action are highlighted with spot lights while others fade out to near darkness. In the back are the heroes, yet to enter the fray.
They carry on a conversation that the audience can hear through speakers near their ears.
Suddenly the stadium’s speaker blast a monstrous roar. Clouds of smoke start to bellow above the field of battle and a massive laser-drawn winged dragon appears above the battle. It beats it’s wings and the audience feels the wind stir around their faces.
The dragon looks at the heroes and talks to them via the chair speaker. It threatens to incinerate the audience. The dragon turns to the audience and inhales. One of the heroes knows magic and casts a large shield over the audience. The dragon’s fire blast rolls over the audience, as heated wind, hitting their faces with chairs shaking. A large laser light display acts as the shield blocking the majority of the fire.
This angers the dragon that then turns his attention on the battle below. A blast on the field furthest from the mountain causes another wave of heat to hit the audience. Fire engulfs the combatants. The combatants have disappeared, when the audience can see again, vaporized by the dragon fire’s intense heat.
The main hero yells No! and starts to run up the mountain towards the audience. The dragon turns to look at him and starts to inhale for another blast. The warrior leaps into the air. With his massive sword first, he is as an arrow, aimed to the heart of the dragon.
The dragon blasts flow around the hero, protected by his magic. The warrior pierces the dragon in a massive explosion of laser, light and pyrotechnics. The blast encompasses the audience with wind and a rumbling of the chairs. All of the combatants are floored from the destruction of the dragon.
So a theater production that takes Cirque du Soleil + Final Fantasy, to the music of Two Steps From Hell, sprinkle laser lights and active chairs (like Disney’s A Bug’s Life chairs).
I figure a two hour show with an intermission. Probably five different stories tied together via a few similarities like Final Fantasy does between stories. Something that can work on the same stage props (mostly the same). Acrobatic fight scenes with an overhead system that allows characters to do massive jumps over their opponents in the fights. Like the games or fantastic martial art type movie scenes.
Use the active chairs when something happens on stage. This would allow for giving the audience an experience beyond just watching the action on the stage. For example, a blast of fire washes over the audience (a small blast of hot air directed to the face of the seated audience) or chairs that rock back when a particular event occurs on the stage.
Also the actors voices could be projected through speakers in the chairs. This would allows the “din” of the battle, the music of the orchestra/band/vocals to be projected differently. Maybe these would come from the stadium/theaters speakers while the main characters would speak in the voices that best projects the emotions of the part (maybe pre-recorded).
Yes I love to dream.
Happy New Year. My first post of 2017! Here’s to hoping for a good year.
As I usually do when I want to write my novels, I stare at my computer until I get the urge to write or look at Facebook or something. This morning, Facebook won out. I found a post about Brian Cox explanation of Fermi’s Paradox. Another article talking about how all aliens must destroy themselves before they break free of their home planet.
I have addressed how I feel this is wrong in this previous post, so I will not dwell on those reasons here. Of course; I, like them, have no clue whether aliens exist or not. We have no substantiated proof either way, yet. It is all conjecture. But what fun this is!
To me, these arguments for self-destruction is superimposing our behavior on any alien race that might exist. While I believe this is a very possible outcome for the human race. I do not believe that means all intelligent races will do the same.
Look at other examples on Earth. Bees for example. How do they expand? Do they grab every possible hive location as soon as possible? Do they constantly war with themselves? They do have their cold-blooded aspects but not like us. Bees expand, or swarm, when they have grown large enough that they can not “smell” the queen. When a hive is so large that the queen’s pheromones can not reach all members in the hive, those members not ‘under her spell’ make a new queen. When she is born, the old queen flies off with a portion of the workers.
A hive grows larger because it has produced enough food to allow the colony to successfully grow. So instead of producing swarms that go out and just find land, they do it when they are over populated. Could an alien race act like this? Why not?
Another example could be the big cats or wolves. Normally they also do not go out and grab all they can grab. They keep their territory unless resources are scarce.
Why would aliens not have a similar behavior? Why would we think that aliens would make their main goal of exploration of everything? Why wouldn’t they just explore their immediate surroundings, find a few places and settle in for a while to develop these resources.
Within 10 light years of Sol (our solar system) there are 15 known stellar objects (stars and red/brown dwarf stars). These are the ones we know of. The last being discovered in 2014, with a few more found since 2010. This leads me to believe there might be at least double this number in this space. If there are 30 systems in this small space, that is a lot of exploration for us to undertake. Each one requiring a mission to be set up, speed up and slow down of the craft on the way, communications between the stars, etc.. That is a lot of resources. And we still have problems on earth that are priorities.
Within 100 light years of Sol, there are over 500 known G type stars (ones we can see as a twinkle of light in the night’s sky). In the 10 light year range, only 2 of them are G type. So if we take a similar ratio of dwarf stars to G types, in 100 light years range there might be 2500 stars. Include even fainter ones, like we are discovering still in 10 light year range, and that might be 5000 or more. Again think of all the trip planning and particulars of the trip to get to all of them.
Humans seem to have the wanderlust that makes them always go over the horizon. That doesn’t seem to be a trait of most of our fellow species of Earth. Why would aliens act more like us and not more like one of the other species of Earth?
Additionally, there are so many resources in this solar system, why would we need to go elsewhere? Yes for humans, its wanderlust. If the species was not prone to wanderlust, when would they need to move? When they have exhausted the resources of a solar system? How long would it take for us to mine out this system? It has been 5000 years of recorded time and we still have not mined out the resources of Earth. What about the moon? asteroids? Mars? Jupiter and her moons? etc…
If a race takes 1000 years to exhaust the resources of an entire star system and thus requiring the aliens to move on. It would take this race 30,000 years to exhaust the 10 light year range from Sol. With the Milky Way galaxy being 100,000 light years wide, it would take this race 30 million years to strip a 10 light year wide strip from one end to the other.
To do this for a 1000 light year wide strip, it would take 3 billion years. That would still leave the vast majority of the galaxy untouched and that is a quarter the age of the galaxy. So even if we had a locust acting race out there, chances are, the galaxy is just too big to swallow.
Have a Happy New Year!
Hope 2017 will be good for everyone! Hope to finish books two and three in 2017.
Please do not read into this. I wrote this in a really weird mood a while back and just read it again today. Think of it being published in the dying hours of 2016.
What happens when you die,
When the day means a little less, is that dying?
When the laughs are a little more forced, is that dying?
When the smile comes less often, is that dying?
When the desire to experience life lessens, is that dying?
When a sigh comes more often than a laugh, is that dying?
When a memory seems more important than now, is that dying?
When those around you laugh and you feel alone, is that dying?
What is dying but the lessening of life.
What is dying but the anticipation of the end.
To live is to experience. To die is the loss of experience.
What happens when you die, you lose the ability to experience.
Finally got pass this hurdle. Completed the first book of the trilogy (First draft). Only took me a year to do. Reluctantly, I was not as productive as I would like to have been but its done.
I am rewriting the book that I published in 2014. In 2015, I wrote a screen play of the story but modified large parts of the story to work in a movie. I liked what I did so much, I decided to rewrite it, extend it and add sub-plots to it.
My goal is to write all three books, then write screen plays of them, and finally, modify the books to conform to the screen plays. If I am lucky, get Hollywood to purchase the story and book publishers to make the books.
So I am cruising through entries in an FB group “Writing Fiction”, using my best procrastination techniques and I come across this blog entry from Shane Snow, “This Surprising Reading Level Analysis Will Change the Way You Write”. This article talks about how many of our great writers write at a middle school level for readability. This translates into higher comprehension and more enjoyment for the reader.
Basically don’t try to write to impress with big words that takes the average reader out of the story. If they have to try and understand the words then it is work and not fun. The goal is to make it easy for the reader to comprehend the story and then visualize the action in their minds. Make it easy for the reader to get into the story and stay there for as long as they are reading it.
Makes sense, right?
It is much more enjoyable to use your imagination to see “Chief Grog, swings his mighty club and with a booming thud smashes the knight backwards. The man flies back into the cavern’s wall and crumples to the ground.”
Than something like: “The leader of the orc tribe, Grog, uses a cudgel, in a round house swing, to impart a massively kinetic blow to the chest region of the hapless armored knight. The forward momentum of the knight was viciously reversed, resulting in the man being thrown backwards, into the wall with bone crushing force.”
For many the second passage might be just as easy to understand. Some might even like the additional detail but it also takes more away from the imagination because it actually details more thoroughly what is happening. This additional detail, with the use of some words that might not be common enough, could stop the flow of the story for the reader and force them to confront the literary reality of reading a story, than living it.
I have read many blogs and articles talking about how the writer should just say enough to give the read the foundation to create the picture in their mind. I like this goal of striving for low detail scenes, for the reader to flesh out.
Well with so much energy going into a blog entry, I should be able to bust out the last few passages of book 1 of my trilogy. Have a great weekend!
John sighed, That’s done, I am home now. He opened the door and was about to call out to his wife and son, when two men grabbed him. They pulled him through the doorway and slammed him against the wall.
“Traitor!” One of the assailants yelled into his face as he knocked the wind out of John.
The other assailant smashed his elbow into John’s jaw. John heard a loud popping sound and wondered if his jaw was broken. A salty taste flooded his mouth.
Not able to think about that taste too much because in came another punch to his stomach and an elbow to the shoulder. Driving him down to the floor. In the background, he heard his wife and son screaming and another person yelling at them.
They were kicking him, now that he was on the ground. He was doing all he could to block the kicks with his legs and arms. Punches pummeled his head. He wife and son continued to scream and the assailants continued to hurl abuse.
What seemed like a long time of beatings eventually stopped. Logically, John knew it was only a minute or two, since he still could reason, but it felt like a lifetime. He knew they could have beat him senseless. Silence as the assailants backed off. Even his family stopped yelling.
Only the sounds of boots on wooden floor, approaching, could be heard. John tested his jaw and found it still moved, at least they did not break his jaw.
“Ya fucked up this time, didn’t ya John?” Said a familiar voice but John couldn’t place it in his rattled state. He tried looking up but his head was still spinning.
“What did I do?” He choked out. Yes, a mouth full of blood and at least one tooth knocked out.
“Oh come now John, let’s not play this game.”
“Please, I don’t know what you think I did. I was out..” He was kicked.
“John… John, that is enough. Lies will just make it worse. You were seen helping that downed pilot. That is treason to help them. You know the Party takes a dim view of this. Especially in light this pilot was part of the attack against the city.”
Fighting to calm himself. “Please, I was out looking for the pilot, like I was supposed to but I didn’t find anyone. I.. I… Please believe me.” He heard his wife start to sob. His son was moaning “No”. He was starting to lose it too.
Sighing, the unrecognized man directed his men to lift John. He was almost beyond fight at this point.
“John this war is not going to be won by being nice to the other side. They choose this path. I believe you thought you were doing good but we can not allow these radicals leniency. They tried to steal the election last year and see what it got us?” They started to drag him out the door. The man continued. “Cooperate with us and I will try to put in a good word for your wife and son.”
His wife yelled. “How could you?”
John snapped at that moment, his sobbing stopped as the last strength came forth. The accusing tone of his wife drove him crazy. He knew they would get the truth out of him but his family would never know it. The truth to his family is all that mattered.
Planting his feet, he pushed one handler into the door hard, forcing him to loosen his grip. Then he violently shook off the other man. Turning back into the house, he looked pass the man, who was going for his gun.
To his wife and son. “It was our daughter. My God, I couldn’t turn her in.”
With the idea that our world is probably not so unique among the millions of star systems and billions of planets, in the Milky Way alone. The chances of there being other intelligent races is pretty good.
Also we tend to discover something mind-blowing every decade or so. Things we had no idea existed a generation ago (atoms, quarks, types of planets around other stars, DNA, etc..) are a reality today.
Having said that, I believe there are many alien civilizations in our neighborhood of the Milky Way and faster than light (FTL) travel is possible. We just aren’t there yet.
Many ask. “Why don’t the aliens visit us?” Well let’s be honest and put the ego aside. We really are not that special are we?? If an alien race has discovered how to travel between the stars in a time frame that is acceptable to them, then what are we to them? A pre-contact Amazonian tribe?
How many of us are rushing to go say hi to those that remain? Yes, we like to see the occasional article about them and maybe a National Geographic special or a Youtube video but really how often do we think of them? Please realize this is not to denigrate these tribes, just using as an example we might understand.
If there are millions of earth like planets in our galaxy, then aliens coming here for our resources is probably an idea that should only exist in Hollywood. Humans are the resource they want, you say? Okay why? We are rather frail, we can not exist easily in many other environments, we are rather annoying and hard to keep in line. Wouldn’t a prospective overlord race think that robots would be better choice of labor than these little meat bags?
They want to rule us you think? I would imagine before they “pushed the button” they would investigate us for a while. Especially since we do not have the technology to detect them. Once they watch us for a while, what do you think? Would any self-respecting conquering race try to bring a bunch of psychopathic, inventive short lived creatures into their empire?
With the ability to gain any resource anywhere else in the galaxy and us being primitives, what value would we serve? Also we tend to fight ourselves and not just for mating, we are really good at killing each other. Why bring such a crazy race into your empire with the chance they might infect others or God forbid, learn new technologies where they might challenge the established rule.
No, if anything it would be best to watch us. Like we do the Amazonian tribes with fly overs. Keep an eye on us. See if we kill off ourselves or actually learn how to work together and get into space. Then they can take us over or if not the conquering type, they might welcome us to the neighborhood.
“We should hear their signals.” One might say. Well think on it. We have only been broadcasting roughly 100 years. In that time most of our communications is now via the internet (land lines mostly), mobiles (short range) and satellite (directed communications). Most broadcast medias are being replaced. There is talk of quantum communications, where there is no signal path. With us doing this in 100 years and still have barely left our planet, what do you think a race that can go between stars is capable of?
Most likely to hear another civilization, we would have to catch them in the first 200 years of their space age. After that, then the chances for them to emit radio waves for us to pick up will drop off significantly.
What we might be able to watch their graviton emissions from spaceships flying near our solar system. We have recently figured out how to measure gravitons. Now it is just for the truly big objects in the Universe. In time we might refine that ability. If the aliens use big ships, then chances are they will cause a disturbance in the gravitational waves as they fly by, snapping their versions of pictures at the primitives.
Like the tribes people looking up at the sound of an airplane and wondering which Gods they might be and what would happen if they come to visit. We will hopefully one day track a graviton emission passing our solar system at speeds well above the normal stellar objects. We too will wonder what god-like beings are doing that and what does that forebode for us, if they decide to stop and say hi.